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Discuss with a partner:
In some countries young people are
encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
starting university studies. 
Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 
Discuss with a partner:
In some countries young people are
encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
starting university studies. 
Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 
Discuss with a partner:
In some countries young people are
encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
starting university studies. 
Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 
Discuss with a partner:
In some countries young people are
encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
starting university studies. 
Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 
Discuss with a partner:
In some countries young people are
encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
starting university studies. 
Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 
Discuss with a partner:
In some countries young people are
encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
starting university studies. 
Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 
Discuss with a partner:
In some countries young people are
encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
starting university studies. 
Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 
Cut up strips and shuffle and have students re-arrange them in order in groups
Cut up strips and shuffle and have students re-arrange them in order in groups
| 
Many Australian high-school
  graduates take a one-year break prior to entering university. This ‘gap year’
  allows them to travel or gain some work experience before recommencing their
  study routine. | 
| 
A well-spent gap year could
  benefit students in a number of ways, but there could also be some drawbacks. | 
| 
One of the main advantages of
  taking a year’s break is that it gives young people the time to assess their
  future. | 
| 
They can use the time to think
  about the type of career they would like to pursue. With the benefit of this
  time, students will be able to choose courses which match their interests and
  abilities. Being satisfied with their choice of courses will increase
  motivation and the likelihood of academic success. Students who go straight
  from school to university are more likely to make poor course choices.  | 
| 
Another benefit of the gap year
  is that it provides students with an opportunity to work. | 
| 
Holding down a job is
  invaluable experience for school-leavers. It teaches them to be responsible
  and also shows them the value of hard work - two attributes that will serve
  them well in the future. Additionally, working in their gap year can
  encourage students to study hard the following year. If they struggle in a
  poorly paid job, for example, they will be motivated to study hard so that
  they will not have to do such a job again.  | 
| 
However, not every student
  would benefit from a gap year. | 
| 
Some young people may become
  accustomed to the financial rewards of working life and find it too difficult
  to give up their salary in order to return to life as a student. This might
  encourage them to settle for a job far less challenging than they are capable
  of doing. Others may have trouble getting back into the habit of regular
  studying. So, these people may not be successful on their return to study. | 
| 
In conclusion, taking a year
  off before commencing university can give young people the time to make good
  choices about their future and also gain some valuable work experience.
  However, some students may find it difficult to resume their studies after
  this break.     | 
Practice Test    Writing Task 2                         
| 
In some countries young people are
  encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and
  starting university studies.  
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
  for young people who decide to do this.  | 
| 
P.1: 
Background  
Topic
  sentence:  
Introduce both sides 
P.2: 
One advantage: 
Time
  to assess future 
P.3: 
Another advantage: 
Work experience 
P.4: 
Disadvantages: 
Hard to give up work 
Lose study habit 
P5:  
Conclusion: 
Advantages &  
Disadvantages  | 
Many
  Australian high-school graduates take a one-year break prior to entering
  university. This ‘gap year’ allows them to travel or gain some work
  experience before recommencing their study routine. A well-spent gap year could
  benefit students in a number of ways, but there could also be some drawbacks. 
One
  of the main advantages of taking a year’s break is that it gives young people
  the time to assess their future. They
  can use the time to think about the type of career they would like to pursue.
  With the benefit of this time, students will be able to choose courses which
  match their interests and abilities. Being satisfied with their choice of
  courses will increase motivation and the likelihood of academic success.
  Students who go straight from school to university are more likely to make
  poor course choices.  
Another
  benefit of the gap year is that it provides students with an opportunity to
  work. Holding down a job is invaluable
  experience for school-leavers. It teaches them to be responsible and also
  shows them the value of hard work - two attributes that will serve them well
  in the future. Additionally, working in their gap year can encourage students
  to study hard the following year. If they struggle in a poorly paid job, for
  example, they will be motivated to study hard so that they will not have to
  do such a job again.  
However,
  not every student would benefit from a gap year.
  Some young people may become accustomed to the financial rewards of working
  life and find it too difficult to give up their salary in order to return to life
  as a student. This might encourage them to settle for a job far less
  challenging than they are capable of doing. Others may have trouble getting
  back into the habit of regular studying. So, these people may not be
  successful on their return to study. 
In conclusion, taking a year off
  before commencing university can give young people the time to make good
  choices about their future and also gain some valuable work experience.
  However, some students may find it difficult to resume their studies after
  this break.     | 
Word Count: 360 
Scrambled order
| 
Many Australian high-school graduates take a
  one-year break prior to entering university. This ‘gap year’ allows them to
  travel or gain some work experience before recommencing their study routine. | 
| 
However, not every student would benefit from a
  gap year. | 
| 
One of the main advantages of taking a year’s
  break is that it gives young people the time to assess their future. | 
| 
They can use the time to think about the type of
  career they would like to pursue. With the benefit of this time, students
  will be able to choose courses which match their interests and abilities.
  Being satisfied with their choice of courses will increase motivation and the
  likelihood of academic success. Students who go straight from school to
  university are more likely to make poor course choices.  | 
| 
In conclusion, taking a year off before
  commencing university can give young people the time to make good choices
  about their future and also gain some valuable work experience. However, some
  students may find it difficult to resume their studies after this break.     | 
| 
Holding down a job is invaluable experience for
  school-leavers. It teaches them to be responsible and also shows them the
  value of hard work - two attributes that will serve them well in the future.
  Additionally, working in their gap year can encourage students to study hard
  the following year. If they struggle in a poorly paid job, for example, they
  will be motivated to study hard so that they will not have to do such a job
  again.  | 
| 
Another benefit of the gap year is that it
  provides students with an opportunity to work. | 
| 
Some young people may become accustomed to the
  financial rewards of working life and find it too difficult to give up their
  salary in order to return to life as a student. This might encourage them to
  settle for a job far less challenging than they are capable of doing. Others
  may have trouble getting back into the habit of regular studying. So, these
  people may not be successful on their return to study. | 
| 
A well-spent gap year could benefit students in
  a number of ways, but there could also be some drawbacks. | 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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