Discuss this
graph with a partner.  What could you
write for an IELTS Task 1 essay?  
The
graph below shows the figures for CFC emissions in four countries between 2005
and 2009.  Summarise the information by
selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Your teacher will give you five strips.  Match the strips to the descriptions.
Restate
  the question using different words. 
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State
  the first main point.  (Topic Sentence) 
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Supporting
  details for first main point. 
 | 
 
State
  the second main point.  (Topic
  Sentence) 
 | 
 
Supporting
  details for second main point. 
 | 
 
Cut up strips
and shuffle.  Have students match strips
to grid.
The line graph shows the amount of CFC
  emissions produced by four different countries from 2005 to 2009. 
 | 
 
The
  main point to note is that CFC emissions have gone down in all countries
  except India. 
 | 
 
Germany
  saw a gradual drop in emissions from 2006, falling from around 850 to just
  under 800 metric tons annually. 
  However, the falls in Russia and Japan occurred more suddenly.  Both countries saw a drop in emissions in
  2008.  Before this time, Japan had been
  producing a fairly constant level of emissions, around 1400 metric tons each
  year, whereas emissions from Russia had been gradually increasing until 2008. 
 | 
 
Another
  important feature to note is that emissions in India, by contrast, increased
  over the same period. 
 | 
 
In 2005 India produced just under 1200
  metric tons, but by 2009 this had increased to over 1500 metric tons.  In 2005 India produced fewer emissions than
  Japan and Russia, but the graph shows that in 2009 both Russia and India were
  producing equal amounts of emissions, just over 1500 metric tons.  If these trends continue, production of
  emissions by India will overtake that of Russia in the future. 
 | 
 
The
graph below shows the figures for CFC emissions in four countries between 2005
and 2009.  Summarise the information by
selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Paragraph 1: 
Restate the question
  using different words  
Paragraph 2: 
First main point:
  except for India, all the countries are decreasing  
Paragraph 3: 
Second main point:
  India is actually increasing 
 | 
  
The line graph shows the amount of CFC emissions produced by four
  different countries from 2005 to 2009. 
The main point to note is that CFC emissions have gone down in all
  countries except India.  Germany saw a
  gradual drop in emissions from 2006, falling from around 850 to just under
  800 metric tons annually.  However, the
  falls in Russia and Japan occurred more suddenly.  Both countries saw a drop in emissions in
  2008.  Before this time, Japan had been
  producing a fairly constant level of emissions, around 1400 metric tons each
  year, whereas emissions from Russia had been gradually increasing until 2008. 
Another important feature to note is that emissions in India, by
  contrast, increased over the same period. 
  In 2005 India produced just under 1200 metric tons, but by 2009 this
  had increased to over 1500 metric tons. 
  In 2005 India produced fewer emissions than Japan and Russia, but the
  graph shows that in 2009 both Russia and India were producing equal amounts
  of emissions, just over 1500 metric tons. 
  If these trends continue, production of emissions by India will
  overtake that of Russia in the future. 
(189 words) 
 | 
 
Scrambled
order
In 2005 India produced just under 1200
  metric tons, but by 2009 this had increased to over 1500 metric tons.  In 2005 India produced fewer emissions than
  Japan and Russia, but the graph shows that in 2009 both Russia and India were
  producing equal amounts of emissions, just over 1500 metric tons.  If these trends continue, production of emissions
  by India will overtake that of Russia in the future. 
 | 
 
Germany
  saw a gradual drop in emissions from 2006, falling from around 850 to just
  under 800 metric tons annually. 
  However, the falls in Russia and Japan occurred more suddenly.  Both countries saw a drop in emissions in
  2008.  Before this time, Japan had been
  producing a fairly constant level of emissions, around 1400 metric tons each
  year, whereas emissions from Russia had been gradually increasing until 2008. 
 | 
 
Another
  important feature to note is that emissions in India, by contrast, increased
  over the same period. 
 | 
 
The main point to note is that CFC
  emissions have gone down in all countries except India. 
 | 
 
The line graph shows the amount of CFC
  emissions produced by four different countries from 2005 to 2009. 
 | 
 


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