Showing posts with label IELTS Writing Task 1. Show all posts
Showing posts with label IELTS Writing Task 1. Show all posts
Thursday, March 16, 2023
Monday, April 12, 2021
Link: Materials for Describing a Process
I was doing a Google Image search for materials for describing a process, and found useful diagrams on two websites here and here.
I've put them on a Google slideshow presentations (slides, pub) and on a Google Doc (docs, pub). I've also included an activity in on the Google document in which the steps are cut up, and then shuffled, and the students have to put them in order.
These diagrams are suitable for Writing IELTS Task 1 -- describe a process, or for practice with the present passive.
Wednesday, July 29, 2020
Line Graphs for Practicing IELTS Writing Task 1
(TESOL Worksheets--IELTS Writing Task 1)
Google: slides, pub
[Notes: None of these are my own. All of them were found using a Google Images search. In my own classes, I use these for practicing talking about the features of line graphs. (I use this as a follow up to my Useful Language for Describing Changes in a Line Graph activity). I print out the Google slides and hand them out to students. They describe their graphs to a partner. Then I put it on the slideshow at the front, and some students come up to describe their graphs to the class.]
Google: slides, pub
[Notes: None of these are my own. All of them were found using a Google Images search. In my own classes, I use these for practicing talking about the features of line graphs. (I use this as a follow up to my Useful Language for Describing Changes in a Line Graph activity). I print out the Google slides and hand them out to students. They describe their graphs to a partner. Then I put it on the slideshow at the front, and some students come up to describe their graphs to the class.]
Sunday, January 29, 2017
IELTS Task 1 Process Writing--2nd Teacher Feedback Form
(TESOL Worksheets--IELTS Task 1)
Google: drive, docs, pub
This is the 4th in my series in my attempts to turn IELTS task 1 writing into process writing. It follows from the self-editing checklist, and the peer-editing checklist, and the 1st teacher feedback form.
In the first teacher feedback from, I provided very little feedback. (I only underlined problem sentences, and did not provide any detailed written comments). In this feedback form, I used my error coding sheet (from here) and also provided more detailed comments in the comment section. I also supplemented this with a short talk with each student.
The students were then instructed to re-write their essay one final time for a final draft.
Google: drive, docs, pub
This is the 4th in my series in my attempts to turn IELTS task 1 writing into process writing. It follows from the self-editing checklist, and the peer-editing checklist, and the 1st teacher feedback form.
In the first teacher feedback from, I provided very little feedback. (I only underlined problem sentences, and did not provide any detailed written comments). In this feedback form, I used my error coding sheet (from here) and also provided more detailed comments in the comment section. I also supplemented this with a short talk with each student.
The students were then instructed to re-write their essay one final time for a final draft.
Student name: ____________________________
IELTS Task 1: Teacher Feedback (2nd Form)
First sentence:
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Did you write a brief introduction using the information from the question and the heading?
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Did you cover all the important information?
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Did you include the categories?
(Note: For graphs or tables with less than 8 categories, try to include the categories, preferably in brackets.)
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Did you paraphrase the vocabulary?
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Did you change the sentence structure?
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Overview:
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Did you include an overview?
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Does your overview include all the key features of the graph?
(Note: Normally this will be somewhere between 2 and 5).
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Does your overview begin with a signal word (such as “overall”) to help the examiner recognize that this is an overview?
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Paragraphing:
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Is your essay divided into clear paragraphs (with line breaks in between the paragraphs)?
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Do you have a separate paragraph for your introduction?
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Do you have at least two separate paragraphs for your body?
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Paragraphing Structure:
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Does each body paragraph start with a clear topic sentence, which give the main idea of the paragraph?
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Does every other sentence in the paragraph relate to the main idea in the topic sentence?
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Is the topic sentence supported by supporting ideas and examples?
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Tense:
Are all of your verbs in the correct tense?
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Active/Passive
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Did you correctly choose the active or passive verb for each sentence?
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In passive verbs, did you remember to use the “be +V3” form?
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If the verb is not in the passive or continuous tense, you do not need to use a "be" verb. Check to make sure there are no extra “be” verbs in your essay.
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Parts of speech
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Are all the words being correctly used as the appropriate part of speech?
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Opinions and outside information
Great Job
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Remember, an IELTS task 1 essay should contain no personal opinions, no speculating, and no outside information. (Task 2 will have opinions, but not task 1).
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Length
Good job
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Too short (You must write at least 150 words, or you will lose points)
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Too long (You won’t lose any points if your essay is too long, but in the exam you will lose valuable time.)
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Comments
Error Correction Codes
Code
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Meaning
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Example
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Correction
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A
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Wrong Article
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A [A]moon goes around a [A] earth.
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The moon goes around the earth.
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^A
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Missing Article
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[^A] Man looked funny.
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The man looked funny.
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Pr
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Wrong Preposition
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I'm interested of [Pr] science.
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I'm interested in science.
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^Pr
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Missing Preposition
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The rabbit jumped [^Pr] the hole.
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The rabbit jumped into the hole.
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WW
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Wrong Word (Or Several Wrong Words)
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The man ate breakfast [WW] in the evening.
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The man ate dinner in the evening.
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^
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Missing Word
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This is the man [^] hit me.
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This is the man who hit me.
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^^
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Two or More Missing Words or Missing Phrase
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I got hit [^^] car.
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I got hit by a car.
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^S
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Missing Subject
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[^S] will be good.
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It will be good.
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^V
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Missing Verb
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Being a radio star [^V]
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Being a radio star will be fun.
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WS
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Wrong Part of Speech
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I'm very interested in financial [WS].
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I'm very interested in finances.
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N
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Number/ Singular or Plural problem.
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I like cat [N].
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I like cats.
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VT
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Verb Tense Problem
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He kick [VT] me yesterday.
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He kicked me yesterday.
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VF
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Verb Form Problem
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I've gotten used to eat [VF] here every day.
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I've gotten used to eating here every day.
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AP
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Active Passive Verb Problem
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A lot of problems experience [AP] here every day.
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A lot of problems are experienced here every day.
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SV
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Subject Verb Agreement Problem
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He like [SV] dogs.
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He likes dogs.
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P
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Punctuation Problem or Spacing Problem
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Do you like dogs. [P]
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Do you like dogs?
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C
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Capitalization Problem
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I'm from america. [C]
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I'm from America.
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Po
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Possessive Form Problem
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The students [Po] homework was finished at last.
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The students' homework was finished at last.
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SF
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Sentence Fragment
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The best thing about fast food [SF]
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The best thing about fast food is the price.
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F
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Form--Countable, uncountable, or other grammatical errors
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I have a lot of homeworks [F].
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I have a lot of homework.
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G
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Other Grammatical Problem
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WO
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Word Order
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He away walked [WO].
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He walked away.
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Sp
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Spelling Problem
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I like to eat peeza [Sp].
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I like to eat pizza.
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??
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I Don't Understand What You Mean
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//
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New Paragraph
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