Started: May 23, 2020
Finished: August 22, 2020
My History with this Book
Like most of my generation, my first encounter with this story was the Don Bluth movie, The Secret of Nimh. My siblings and I saw the movie when it was shown on the Disney channel in the mid 80s (*1) , (*2). We recorded it off of TV onto VHS, and watched and re-watched it to the point of memorization.In 5th grade, I had to read the book because our teacher chose it for our in-class reading project. As much as I loved the movie, I was skeptical when the teacher handed out the book. In fact, it was because I loved the movie so much that I doubted the book could give me anything new. I felt like I knew the movie backwards and forwards, and there was no point in reading the book.
I was at the age where, despite what my parents and teachers kept telling me, I was not convinced that books were superior to movies. And I much preferred the cartoon versions of classics than the real books. The cartoons had vibrant colors, memorable character designs, engaging slapstick and exciting action scenes. The books just had a lot of long boring descriptions. That plus the illustrations in the book never imprinted on me the way the cartoon versions did, and I often resented the fact that the book illustrations were trying to replace the characters I loved with blander versions. (*3)
So, when the teacher gave us the book, I was skeptical that it would give me anything that the movie hadn't already given me.
...and therefore was pleasantly surprised to find out how absorbing the book was.
The plot beats are basically the same in the book as in the movie. (Except for the ending--we'll get into that later). But the book immerses you in the story so much more fully. The story of how the rats were transformed, how they escaped, and the intricate underground cavern they constructed is much more fleshed out in the book.
5th grade was 30 years ago now (*4), so I don't remember the reading experience in detail. I remember a few key scenes that stuck in my head (*5), but other than that I just remember the general feeling--and that general feeling was finding the details of the book fascinating despite knowing in advance what the story was (*6).
In fact, I enjoyed this book so much, that after we finished reading it as a class, I decided to continue on on by myself. I got the sequel, Racso and the Rats of NIMH, out from the library and read that. Unfortunately 30 years later, I don't remember anything at all about Racso and the Rats of NIMH, other than remembering that I enjoyed it (*7).
Why I'm Re-Reading This Book
So, this is actually a cross-over post with my ESL Extensive Reading project. Meaning, I re-read this book because I was using it in the ESL classroom.Back in May, I took over a class of high level teenagers in General English ESL class--a demographic I've not taught since my days in Cambodia 5 years ago. And I remembered how in the old days I used to rely a lot on Graded Readers and classroom reading when teaching teenagers. So I thought about which books I could use with this class. I remembered having enjoyed this book when I was in 5th grade. It wasn't a book designed for ESL students, but these were advanced level students, and I figured that since I had read it in in elementary school, an advanced ESL student would be able to follow it. So I set about seeing if I could track down a copy.
Finding a Copy Online
Since I'm in Vietnam, locating books is always the problem. There wasn't a copy in my local bookstore. So I searched the Internet to see if I could find some free PDF that someone had uploaded somewhere. After stumbling through a few dodgy Russian websites, I eventually found a copy of this book at http://esl-bits.net/. And then I kicked myself for not checking that website first, since I had already known about it. In fact, I had known about esl-bits.net for several months now--ever since a co-worker had sent me the link back in October of 2019. (*8)
Mrs. Frisby and the Rats of NIMH is available for free online HERE . And so, I was able to use the text and the audio from this site to read and listen to this book in my English classes. (I used it as a reading text in one class, and then later as an extensive listening project in 4 advanced listening classes that I taught.)
I'll talk more about my experiences using this book in an ESL classroom (for anyone who's interested) at the end. But first, let's get into the review.
The Review (SPOILER ALERT)
The basic premise is really cool. It's a classic "you never know what bizarre things can be happening right in your own backyard" type story. The Fitzgibbon family has no idea that a whole new rat civilization is developing right under their rosebush. And then when we actually get inside the rat home, and we find out that it has electric elevators, and carpets, and a library and stained glass windows that reflect electric lights... all under this unassuming little rosebush in the middle of an ordinary farmer's yard. It really fires up the imagination. I think children always find fascinating these hidden little world types of stories--which also accounts for the popularity of similar stories like The Littles, or The Borrowers. (Even revisiting it as an adult, I found it pretty cool.)
The backstory, describing the lab experiments and the transformation of the rats, also goes into excruciating detail.
Now, it is true that (as I mentioned above) this book isn't quite as deep as I had remembered it. The ideological discussions that the rats have about their new society weren't quite as complex as I had remembered from my childhood. But there is at least something here nevertheless. The brief hints that we get of what this new rat society could develop into are fun to imagine. As Nicodemus muses (in Chapter 21):
Surely rats would have developed reading and writing, judging by the way we took to it. But what about machines? What about cars and airplanes? Maybe not airplanes. After all, monkeys, living in trees, must have felt a need to fly, must have envied the birds around them. Rats may not have that instinct.In the same way, a rat civilization would probably never have built skyscrapers, since rats prefer to live underground. But think of the endless subways-below-subways-below-subways they would have had.
Dr Schultz was a neurologist — that is, an expert on brains, nerves, intelligence, and how people learn things. He hoped, by experimenting on us, to find out whether certain injections could help us to learn more and faster. The two younger people working with him, George and Julie, were graduate workers in biology.
And given that Mrs. Frisby and the other animals are consistently characterized as having human level intelligence, one certainly gets the impression that there's nothing to prevent Mrs. Frisby from learning about electricity if it was simply explained to her.
I had previously mentioned the incredible amount of detail in the Rats of NIMH's backstory was a strength, but I should probably qualify this remark. It's a strength insofar as it helps you to take the premise of the book seriously. But it's a weakness in terms of narrative momentum. The long backstory takes up about a third of the book. And not all of it is necessary.
Chapters 14, 15, 16 and 17, which describe how the rats were captured, taken to the laboratory, and experimented upon, are actually pretty interesting. The escape from the laboratory (chapter 18) goes into perhaps a bit more detail about the air shafts then necessary, but is also moderately interesting. But then once the rats get out of the laboratory, the rest of the backstory--talking about how they stayed at Boniface Estate, and how they discovered a toy truck before eventually settling on the Fitzgibbon's farm--takes up an additional 3 more chapters, and is probably unnecessary.
And then, after all that backstory, the story doesn't reach any sort of climax. I mean, after all that backstory, and after all that build-up, we really need some sort of dramatic pay-off at the end, and the book doesn't really give us one.
Which brings me to the key difference between the book and the movie.
The movie had a good-old fashioned dramatic climax, with Jenner killing Nicodemus, Jenner fighting Justin, and Mrs. Frisby's house almost sinking into the mud and getting saved at the last minute. But none of that was in the book. Arguably both for better and for worse.
The big difference between the movie and the book is the lack of conflict in the book. There's no dramatic sword fight in the book between Jenner and Justin. Jenner and his followers leave the colony peacefully--and in the book, Jenner only ever appears in the backstory sections.
Again, I'm somewhat torn as to whether I consider this a positive or a negative. On the one hand, the movie version of Jenner makes him into a typical cartoon villain. (Movie Jenner is pure evil just for the sake of being evil--like most villains in children's cartoons.) In the movie, the conflict between Jenner and Justin, and the sword fight at the end, while it did add a necessary climax to the movie, in some ways also cheapened the story by resorting to a stereotypical villain cliches.
I think it was for this reason that for years I had remembered Jenner as being more complex and developed in the book. But now that I've re-read the book, I realize that he's actually not that much more developed in the book. Jenner's ideological position in the book--his objections to the Thorn Valley plan, and his insistence that there's nothing wrong with stealing from humans-- aren't really articulated that much better in the book than they are in the movie. In other words, there's no great exchange of ideas between Jenner and Nicodemus in the book. Jenner is simply presented as a reactionary who can't foresee the necessity of the new plan, and he doesn't get much more color than that (*16). It's not that the Jenner in the book is so great, it's that the Jenner in the movie is so bad. Because in the book, at least, Jenner doesn't degenerate into a mindless cartoon villain. And that made me remember the book as being deeper than it really was.
But on the other hand, as cliched as he was, evil cartoon Jenner brought a much needed dramatic climax to the movie that is sorely lacking in the book.
I don't know. I have mixed feelings.
Other Notes
The DialogueIn my opinion, this book has a case of "all the characters talk the same" syndrome. The author, Robert C. O'Brien, has a rather loquacious narration style, and it spills over to his characters as well. Nicodemus, when narrating the backstory, talks in the same style. Justin, when talking about all the logistics of putting the sleeping powder in Dragon's bowl, uses the same style. The characters, in other words, are in danger of all sounding like the same person, and not emerging as distinct personalities.
The Ambiguity
Another thing that can be either positive or negative depending on how you look at it: the ambiguity throughout the book.
In the movie version, the narrator states very explicitly that the mice were sucked down the air shaft to their deaths. In the book, however, it's not clear what happened to them. They got blown away, but no one knows anymore than that. Nicodemus states that maybe they found their way out, or maybe they died in the air shafts. No one knows.
Jenner's death as well is ambiguous. It sure sounds like that was Jenner and his group that got electrocuted at the hardware store, but the characters go to great pains to emphasize that they aren't 100% certain.
Likewise with the death of Justin at the end. It's quite possible it might have been Justin who died, but Mrs. Frisby's family never finds out for sure.
It's an interesting narrative choice, but it's definitely a choice. It happens in the book too often to be just an oversight.
Interestingly, this ambiguity is overturned in the sequel Racso and the Rats of NIMH, in which it is revealed that both Jenner and Justin are alive and well. (I don't actually remember this terribly well from my own reading 30 years ago, but I used the plot summary on Wikipedia to brush up.) But then, Racso and the Rats of NIMH is not written by the author himself, who was dead by this time, but by his daughter. So I guess this raises the question of whether or not resolving this ambiguity would have been the original author's wish.
National Institute for Mental Health
So, I guess every fan of the book knows that NIMH stands for "National Institute of Mental Health". But how do we know that?
I have this memory from 5th grade of there being some sort of great reveal moment in the book where the meaning of NIMH was revealed. But re-reading it with my students, I waited in vain for that line to appear in the book.
Nowhere in the book does it ever reveal what NIMH stands for.
Another interesting narrative choice--maybe this goes along with the pattern of ambiguity I mentioned earlier.
Names
So, what's up with the names in this book?
The animals all have common human names: Jonathon, Martin, Jeremy, etc. Which is probably strange if you think about it for too long, but of course you try not to think about it for too long because it's a children's story with talking animals.
But then, once the rats are introduced, the common names are interspersed with some rather unusual choices. Nicodemus. Jenner. Sullivan.
Really, how does a rat end up with a name like Nicodemus or Sullivan? It took me out of the story a bit.
And while I'm on the subject... what kind of a strange name is Mrs. Frisby? Her husband has a first name (Jonathon Frisby). Why does Mrs. Frisby not have a first name?
And why is the Frisby family the only animals in the book who have a last name...
It's an interesting little tragic backstory to the Frisby family that Jonathan Frisby died about a year before this story took place. But, I don't know if the author quite pulls it off. When it's finally revealed how Jonathan Frisby died, I'm not sure that scene has the emotional punch it needed. It seems like just another detail in the long backstory. Mrs. Frisby is briefly upset, and then the story just moves on.
Also, Nicodemus losing his eye seems like another lost opportunity in the backstory. You think it's going to be some big dramatic reveal, and then he just says in Chapter 19: "It was in one of the dangerous times that I lost my eye and got the scar you can see on my face." What is the point of that?
So, as of this writing, I've now used this story in 5 classes since I first started experimenting with it back in May. In each class, a few students have really liked it, but the overall reception has been decidedly luke-warm.
The first 9 chapters are all about Mrs. Frisby and poor little sick Timothy. My students seemed to give the story the benefit of the doubt at first, but by chapter 9 they were getting really bored with it.
(In one of my classes, the teaching assistant told me the students wanted to stop doing the story. I did a mid-course analysis to check student engagement, and the majority of the students either wanted to keep going or didn't have any strong feelings one way or the other. But the ones who disliked it really disliked it.)
Interest picked up when the plot twist about the rats of NIMH was introduced, and for at least a couple chapters afterwards interest was high. Then Nicodemus goes into his long backstory in chapter 14. The first couple chapters, the interest was still high, but as the backstory goes on and on, interest begins to die out. When the backstory finally ends in chapter 23, student interest is very low, and it was very difficult keeping them engaged for the last few chapters.
Now that I've finished re-reading Mrs. Frisby and the Rats of NIMH, I really wish I had access to the sequel Racso and the Rats of NIMH , because I'm totally in the mood to keep going with this series. But unfortunately, I can't find a copy online, and finding books here in Asia is always a struggle. So, for the moment, I will have to leave the series here.
Currently reading Mrs Frisby to my 4yo. I haven’t read it myself since I was a kid.
— Jon Doane (@jpdoane) May 24, 2020
Ha, funny you guys should mention that. Just started using Mrs Frisby in my ESL class here in Vietnam. Using it with high level teenagers, but they're still struggling with the vocabulary. 4 year old sounds very ambitious. Can she understand it?
— Joel Swagman (@JoelswagmanJoel) May 24, 2020
He gets (and loves) the overall story but I’m sure there are a bunch of words he doesn’t understand. I will often stop and ask if he knows what a word means and we’ll talk about it (he usually just wants me to stop talking and get back to the book)
— Jon Doane (@jpdoane) May 24, 2020
He loved it. Certainly didn’t understand every word and asked a lot of questions, but he liked it a lot. We watched the movie too, which it turns out kinda sucks (my adult opinion - he liked it)
— Jon Doane (@jpdoane) July 19, 2020
Movies always pale in comparison to the book. The plot really got dumbed down a lot. But the animation in that movie was really great for its time--especially in comparison to what Disney was doing in the same time period.
— Joel Swagman (@JoelswagmanJoel) July 20, 2020
Yes, I read somewhere that this was a common criticism of the movie adaptation when it first came out.
— Joel Swagman (@JoelswagmanJoel) July 21, 2020
I loved the book as a kid, haven’t read it since. Should check it out
— Adam Fleming Petty (@flamingpetty) August 11, 2020
* "only talked about by others" |
Also, during this same period, a co-worker of mine mentioned he had just re-reading this book with his girlfriend. (He wanted to introduce this story to his Vietnamese Girlfriend).
All the people mentioned above are the same age as me, or a few years younger (i.e. mid-30s to early 40s). So it seems that I'm not the only person of my generation still interested in this book all these years later.
As you can also see from the above discussion, there's some debate about whether the book or the movie is superior. My friend Jon prefers the book, Freddie Deboer says the movie is better.
Which brings me to the next section:
The Book Versus the Movie
I actually used this movie in the classroom three years ago as part of my showing movies in the classroom project.
Shortly afterwards, Avclub posted an article: The Secret Of NIMH leaves basically every kid who sees it with a lingering dread and I reacted to that article on my blog.
I've had a look at my old post, and it still represents the way I feel about the movie now, so rather than write something new here, I'll just quote myself:
The reviewer hits many of the main points about the movie in the article linked above, so I'll just add a couple thoughts of my own:To this, I'll add a couple more observations:
1) While I was creating PowerPoints for this movie, I used a lot of Screencaps to help break down the story and dialogue for my students (I used the ones available at this site here).
In the process of pouring over all these frames of animation, I noticed something. The animation on this movie is absolutely stunning.
Not only lots of detail in the frames, but also very interesting perspectives and camera angles.
This was Don Bluth's first animated feature after he broke away from Disney, and it's apparent that he was out to dazzle the world with his first movie.
It's a pity it never did well in theaters, but I suppose it has done well enough on home video to cement Don Bluth's reputation.
2) As the reviewer says (in the article linked to above) the main plot for The Rats of Nimh is relatively straightforward, but all the backstory and side characters make it convoluted.
Too convoluted, says Roger Ebert. " It is not quite such a success on the emotional level, however, because it has so many characters and involves them in so many different problems that there's nobody for the kids in the audience to strongly identify with."
It never bothered me as a kid, but as an adult, watching this movie with my students last year, I noticed it. There's too much story crammed in here for any of the characters to have meaningful arcs. There's a lot of complexity hinted at with with the backstory of the rats of NIMH, but it's never really fleshed out.
The book on which The Secret of Nimh is based, Mrs. Frisby and the Rats of NIMH, is much better. Or at least, it is if memory serves. (The last time I read the book was all the way back in 5th grade. But it made an impression on me, and I can still remember many parts of it clearly.)
2) Fredrik deBoer, on the other hand, much prefers the movie because the book has no dramatic climax. And I really see where he's coming from. The book needed more of a climax. But at the same time, I don't like how Jenner degenerates into a mindless villain in the movie. Perhaps somewhere out there, there's another adaptation of this story waiting to be made--an adaptation in which we get both more complex motivation from Jenner, and also a big dramatic climax.
Footnotes (docs, pub)
(*1) I don't remember being aware of the 1982 theatrical release. I was barely 4 years old at the time, and had an early childhood that was sheltered from the mass-media, so I wasn't cogniscient of what was playing in the movie theaters until I started school.
(*2) Yeah, in retrospect, it's ironic that the Disney Channel was showing this movie, giving that this is the movie Don Bluth made specifically to prove himself a challenger to Disney. But then, given Disney's reputation for acquiring absolutely everything, it's not surprising.
Fortunately I can supplement my poor memory by going to the Wikipedia page, and reading about the book there.
According to Wikipedia, Racso and the Rats of NIMH wasn't even written by the same author, but was written by his daughter. I don't think I realized that when I originally read the book.
The website appears to be run by a well-meaning Australian guy, who appears to genuinely believe that his website is covered by fair-use because it's not for profit and intended for educational purposes only. But my own guess is that this website is running on borrowed time--the only reason it's been allowed to exist is because the copyright holders haven't found it yet. My prediction is sooner or later, it'll get shut down. Hopefully later, though, because there's a lot of great stuff on the website.
The audio recording seems to be professional quality. (As someone who's listened to a lot of free audiobooks from librivox, I can tell the difference between amateur quality and professional.) So I'm relatively sure that it's the official audio book created by the licensed publishers that's been uploaded.
The website says that the text has been "modified", but it certainly hasn't been simplified at all for ESL learners. The only modifications I could find in the text is where it was changed from American to Australian/British English. For example, "elevator" is changed to "lift".
The guy running the website is Australian, so I guess this is fair enough as it's his website. But unfortunately this means that the audio no longer matches the text exactly.
It's a minor complaint. The text still matches the audio 99% of the time. (The instances where the American and Australian English are different are very few.) But it is still a discrepancy. I didn't want my students to get confused, so when I used these chapters with my classes, I copied them on to a Google doc, and then listened to the audio as I read it, and corrected any words that were different. Then, in the reading class, I played the audio for the students and they could follow along with the printed version. For the listening class, I downloaded the audio from the website, and sent the audio file to my students without the text.
Nicodemus, when recalling Jenner, always talks with some fondness and sentimentality about him (another dynamic which was, of course, entirely absent from the film) but that's about it.
(*17) Unless, of course, there's something wrong with the online copy I was using. But I think it's a complete copy--see footnote 8.
(*18) Wait, what? Baader-Meinhof effect? As in the German New Left Militant group founded by Andreas Baader and Ulrike Meinhof?
Yes, apparently so. According to Wikipedia:
The Baader–Meinhof phenomenon was originally noticed by a Terry Mullen, who in 1994 wrote a letter to a newspaper column in which he mentioned that he had first heard of the Baader–Meinhof Group, and shortly thereafter coincidentally came across the term from another source.
Video Review (Playlist HERE)
I rambled on for too long, so the video review is in 2 parts. The first part ends abruptly. (My camera automatically shuts off after 30 minutes.)
Part 1
Link of the Day
Noam Chomsky: Language, Cognition, and Deep Learning | Lex Fridman Podcast #53
2 comments:
I probably said this in one of your earlier NIMH posts, but in '82 I dragged a fellow 17-year-old classmate to the movie because I'd been following Bluth's split with Disney and was wondering how this independent feature would play. We sat through it, and when the end credits rolled he regarded me with this "Am I wrong about you?" look, and that was the last animated movie I took another person to until Aladdin rolled out.
Question: is personification an issue with your students? I imagine every culture personifies animals and has a larder of folktales with animal characters, but maybe I presume.
I don't think I've heard that story before. Maybe I have. (I can be pretty forgetful sometimes).
This may be childhood nostalgia talking, but I think The Secret of Nimh holds up pretty well. It's got a pretty complex plot for a children's movie, and there's a lot going on in those final scenes.
...of course, some of it is pretty squarely aimed at children. Jeremy the crow, for example, doesn't hold up well to adult sensibilities.
The issue of animal personification didn't come up a lot in our class discussions. So I don't really know what my students were thinking, to be honest. I don't think it was an issue, though, as Vietnamese folk tales usually personify animals--as you say. And even if it didn't, Disney movies are now part of every country's pop-culture landscape now anyway.
What was an issue, however, is that most Asian countries don't have a distinction between the words rat and mouse. (As I mentioned once before http://joelswagman.blogspot.com/2020/01/the-chinese-zodiac-and-cat-interesting.html ), and so this was something I had to draw my students' attention to.
At the end of one class, a girl said, "Before reading this book, I thought mice and rats were the same thing." Well, at least they will remember 1 new vocabulary word from my class.
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