Discuss
this graph with a partner. What would you write in an IELTS task 1
essay?
The
chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related
industries between 1989 and 1999.
Summarise
the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
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Writing Task 1: p.182
The
chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related
industries between 1989 and 1999.
Summarise
the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
|
Insert
the missing
verbs to
complete this report.
The
bar graphs (1._____________) employment figures in five
leisure-related industries between 1989 and 1999.
The
hotel industry (2._____________) the most people, almost 300,000, in
1989. It (3.______ closely _______________) by the sports and food
industries, which (4.______________) just fewer than 285,000 workers
each. Far fewer people (5.______________) in the fields of culture
(82,800) and travel (60,900).
Excluding
culture, all fields of employment (6.___________________) over the
10-year period. The largest rise (7.__________) in the travel
industry. Employment in this industry almost (8._______________) to
114,200 in 1999. The number of food-related jobs also (9.__________)
significantly and by 1999 this industry (10. ______
_______________) the hotel industry as the biggest employer, with
just over 350,000 workers. Employment in hotel and sports industries
(11._______________) steadily over the same period, while the number
of culture-based jobs (12._______________) slightly, from 82,800 to
77,400.
To sum up, overall employment in tourism-related
industries (13._________) steadily from 1989 to 1999. The only
exception to this (14._______) in the field of culture, where
employment (15._________________) slightly.
Answers
The
bar graphs (1.____compares_________)
employment figures in five leisure-related industries between 1989
and 1999.
The
hotel industry (2.__employed___________)
the most people, almost 300,000, in 1989. It (3.___was___
closely ________followed_______)
by the sports and food industries, which (4.___had___________)
just fewer than 285,000 workers each. Far fewer people
(5.___worked___________)
in the fields of culture (82,800) and travel (60,900).
Excluding
culture, all fields of employment (6._________increased__________)
over the 10-year period. The largest rise (7._____was_____)
in the travel industry. Employment in this industry almost
(8._____doubled__________)
to 114,200 in 1999. The number of food-related jobs also
(9.___rose_______)
significantly and by 1999 this industry (10. _had_____
___overtaken____________)
the hotel industry as the biggest employer, with just over 350,000
workers. Employment in hotel and sports industries
(11._______increased________)
steadily over the same period, while the number of culture-based jobs
(12.______dropped_________)
slightly, from 82,800 to 77,400.
To sum up, overall employment in tourism-related
industries (13.____rose_____) steadily from 1989 to 1999. The
only exception to this (14.__was_____) in the field of
culture, where employment (15.________decreased_________)
slightly.
Writing Task 1:
p.182
The
chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related
industries between 1989 and 1999.
Summarise
the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
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Paragraph
1:
Rewrite the question
Paragraph
2:
employment
in 1989 only
Paragraph
3:
The
changes in employment
Overview:
All
increased, except culture
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The
bar graphs compare employment figures in five leisure-related
industries between 1989 and 1999.
The
hotel industry employed the most people, almost 300,000, in 1989.
It was closely followed by the sports and food industries, which
had just fewer than 285,000 workers each. Far fewer people worked
in the fields of culture (82,800) and travel (60,900).
Excluding
culture, all fields of employment increased over the 10-year
period. The largest rise was in the travel industry. Employment in
this industry almost doubled to 114,200 in 1999. The number of
food-related jobs also rose significantly and by 1999 this
industry had overtaken the hotel industry as the biggest employer,
with just over 350,000 workers. Employment in hotel and sports
industries increased steadily over the same period, while the
number of culture-based jobs dropped slightly, from 82,800 to
77,400.
To sum up, overall employment in
tourism-related industries rose steadily from 1989 to 1999. The
only exception to this was in the field of culture, where
employment decreased slightly.
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Word count: 165
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